A little rough around the edges, but I have to give you credit for actually treating player lives as clothing. It's shockingly rare that strip games like this actually involve the stripping going both ways! It's the whole point of the game!
The dialogue is actually a nice feature, though in English at least it seems a little weird. But this might be due to the dynamic or generated feature, so its not exactly proofread or anything right?
I would maybe like it if there was a bit more feedback or idea of how the player is doing in terms of clothing, but that's just a personal thing of thinking the player avatar needs a clear idea of their state of dress as well.
Thank you for the feedback! I really appreciate the detailed comment.
The dialogue system was originally written in Russian for many different situations between the player and Asuka. In total there were around 12,000 words. For the HTML version I used machine translation, so the English can definitely feel a bit strange sometimes.
The life system ended up being just numbers mostly because it was easier for me to implement quickly. I agree that some clearer visual feedback for the player's clothing/state would probably make it feel better.
Also, this game is actually a port of a small Telegram bot I made a while ago. I mostly moved it to HTML so it could live somewhere permanently instead of relying on a bot running 24/7.
Honestly, I didn’t expect people to play it at all, so seeing feedback like this is really nice. Thanks again!
That was my hunch, it's certainly a downside to machine translations still. But I'm also not going to say you should go through and proofread 12,000 words over a little free project here.
A Telegram bot huh? I've never heard of that before.
And things that actually get strip games done right deserve some proper feedback! It's the only way more can be made, or improvements can be offered! We need more things like Strip Poker Night at the Inventory, or this instead of generic amass $10,000 in boring poker hands to buy clothes off a dealer garbage.
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A little rough around the edges, but I have to give you credit for actually treating player lives as clothing. It's shockingly rare that strip games like this actually involve the stripping going both ways! It's the whole point of the game!
The dialogue is actually a nice feature, though in English at least it seems a little weird. But this might be due to the dynamic or generated feature, so its not exactly proofread or anything right?
I would maybe like it if there was a bit more feedback or idea of how the player is doing in terms of clothing, but that's just a personal thing of thinking the player avatar needs a clear idea of their state of dress as well.
Thank you for the feedback! I really appreciate the detailed comment.
The dialogue system was originally written in Russian for many different situations between the player and Asuka. In total there were around 12,000 words. For the HTML version I used machine translation, so the English can definitely feel a bit strange sometimes.
The life system ended up being just numbers mostly because it was easier for me to implement quickly. I agree that some clearer visual feedback for the player's clothing/state would probably make it feel better.
Also, this game is actually a port of a small Telegram bot I made a while ago. I mostly moved it to HTML so it could live somewhere permanently instead of relying on a bot running 24/7.
Honestly, I didn’t expect people to play it at all, so seeing feedback like this is really nice. Thanks again!
That was my hunch, it's certainly a downside to machine translations still. But I'm also not going to say you should go through and proofread 12,000 words over a little free project here.
A Telegram bot huh? I've never heard of that before.
And things that actually get strip games done right deserve some proper feedback! It's the only way more can be made, or improvements can be offered! We need more things like Strip Poker Night at the Inventory, or this instead of generic amass $10,000 in boring poker hands to buy clothes off a dealer garbage.